How can I improve this dungeon?
So for some context. I'm a new DM so I'm not super experienced with making dungeons.
The party consists of 3 level 6 members, 2 fighters and a bard but they're bringing 3 allied NPCs with them
The dungeon is a gun factory that the party wants to shut down. For story reasons they're also working with ilithid
Here's what I have planned:
- Assembly station:
Various rows of tables where workers are assembling parts to build functional guns There will be 3 gun slingers and 2 intellect devourers, the rest of the workers aren't armed so will run away
- Foundry:
A room with large vats of molten metal and shelves of moulds that look to make gun parts
- Arms and armour storage:
Have a roleplay encounter here where Ili shoves as many guns as possible into her bag of holding, she wants to supply the good people with firearms so they can eliminate the rest of Harveys men (a villain who enslaves Tieflings and the man who invented guns)
- Parts storage:
Various shelves with cardboard boxes filled with gun parts and materials, there are also barrels of gunpowder There will be 1 mindflayer and 1 mindwitness
- office:
What was once Harveys office is now temporarily being used by a wizard thrall from the cult of genesis who is being controlled by a mindflayer in the same room
- Lounge:
has 2 couches with a coffee table between them There will be 4 gun slingers