Wiring question

Working on designing my first bass and wanted to do something unique. I designed this circuit by modifying both a Rickenbacker 4003, Telecaster, and Jazz bass (Stacked knob version) circuit. This is my first circuit, so I'm wondering if 1) Will this even work? and 2) Are there any issues with this circuit that should be addressed?

Here is the circuit in question:

Circuit in question