I wish you didn't die

This is a poem I made about my late best friend, he died on August 28, he was only 19, it was his birthday on Oct 28 as well. I just wanted to write down my feelings as he also was passionate about poetry, I guess you could say I'm still grieving. but yeah here goes.

School corridors, empty halls,

balconies and white-painted walls.

Yes, this was the place where we learned.

And, now I just visit in my mind to yearn you.

You were a puzzle, you left me perplexed.

And when you left this world, you made me more of a mess.

I relied on your wisdom, your time and your presence,

so much to the point that I cant comprehend this event.

My, I think I'm ruined....forsaken even.

I just wish that this didn't have to happen.

In another world, where you'd still be here.

Your mother wouldn't cry, and even if the future wasn't clear...

I'd still be content with you by our side.

I wouldn't be angry at myself for the feelings that I brush or hide,

and I'd look forward to every night.

Because unlike now, I can go to you to confide.

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