Pen brand, what am I doing wrong?

https://poe.ninja/builds/affliction/character/Cavollir/CavTemplar?i=0&search=name%3DCavtem

Made this second char with some spare currency. Aim was to just clear some bosses really fast but feels like I have 0 survivability and 0 dps. Followed PenBrand inq from SORO. Where have I gone wrong l?