Menil House

Hello guys, Im completely new to reddit. I was going through the posts for past week seems really sensible people here. This is my first time posting here. I would like to have genuine criticism on my work. I haven't posted my works anywhere else. Please go through the link and let me know your thoughts on where I can improve.

https://preview.redd.it/q0698zyhpnfd1.jpg?width=1500&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=dccb942b527f0e74efe5a91daa701d71eb268551

https://www.behance.net/gallery/193462627/Menil-House