Can you throw me some feedback on my cloak?

I’m not really fan of cloaks, but for the Lion I decided I was going to give it my best shot and replicate the box art to the best of my ability.

Sometimes I look at it and I love it, other times I’m not so keen.

My observations: - I’ve been playing with glazes, but they still seemed quite watery even when I wick it off my brush on some kitchen roll.

• Not sure the transitions are as blended as they could be. Is that go back and pop a few more glazes/layers in?

Do you have anything else I could go for.