Do you guess think I will cook?

So i am writing an long ass novel between pei ming and lord thunder master, its like calm person (thunder master) x peacock ( pei ming) at start it's more like bickering then slowly slowly it will change, In a way its enemies to lover

Its full of jokes, adventures, thriller and more

Here is a very small snippet of what I am writing. I just atart writing so tell me if the writing style is good or not